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What's new...? Life happens...

Please note: Last few months have been unexpectedly hectic. The "hectic" being an indication that I am a master of understatement. Mostly attributable to an excess of workload.

Hopefully, the circumstances look like clearing ahead and very soon the craziness may be over and I'll try to get back on track as soon as I can. It's possible that I'll release several episodes at once or at least withing short span of time, to make up for lost time.

The best way to get informed is to register, so I may be able to send you an email once the episodes are posted.

Update pending.

 

Game

I am now on bi-weekly schedule of episodes releases. One of the first thing on my TTD list is to revise the first 4 episodes. They were churned in a quick succession, to keep the ball rolling, so the editing aspect, though not neglected, did not have its play time as it should. By the end of March, the revised versions should be all in and replace the current archive.

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Having more time--two weeks--instead of just a week plus is better. The shorter schedule is rather taxing. I would not be able to keep up with it for long.  I can write an episode script in a week, but having the quiet time to reflect on it and edit after I thought things through--CJ got that pattern right.

Since I have a bit of relief and you, dear reader, have to wait for the next release...
How about a little game?

Take your crystal ball and peer inside (or just stare blankly at a wall--whatever works for you) and let me know in comments where you think the story is going. Make your predictions for any aspect of the story. It would be interesting to compare, later on, to what degree your predictions match up with the actual story.

What about the glyph? If you did not just skim read, you'd know what that is. Heh.




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0 # Dean 2011-03-27 16:01
Hi.

Have those 4 episodes been revised?
I haven't read any yet, but when I saw this post I figured I'd wait until the revised versions were up.

Looking forward to reading them!
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0 # Lumir G Janku 2011-03-27 17:40
Dean, not yet. Should be by April 2, at the time of the release of E06.

Lumir
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0 # Lumir G Janku 2011-04-03 09:44
Dean, revisions of E01 to E04 are posted. Enjoy!
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0 # Todd 2011-05-17 08:54
Lumir, Thanks for all your work on this. You are doing a great job. I have read thru all of them a few times.

As for the game, I don't know where you are taking this but i feel something bigger is on the way. Just not sure what.
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0 # Lumir G Janku 2011-05-28 12:08
Todd, something's always on the way. Small or big. The big growing from tiny seeds.

Glad you're not sure what. It's an indication that there's a degree of unpredictabilit y from episode to episode. The purpose is not to hook the reader to read the next episode, though on occasion I may employ it as a device to buttress the vertical dimension of the story. I try to breathe life into the story, the ebbs and flows, intended and unintended consequences and the existential esprit, with their chancey unpredictable fabric forming at any point in time.

I hope I'm succeeding, at least in part.
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0 # Todd 2011-06-13 09:23
So what is going on at the end of E10? I just read it again and I didn’t notice it before but the staring between John Henry and Cameron and then Cameron nodding “yes” was John Henry some how accessing the chip in Cameron’s head that was there to help her with her memories? Did he transfer more or the cyborg Cameron to the new Cameron?
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0 # Lumir G Janku 2011-06-14 00:51
Todd, no, no accessing was going on there, at least not by some form of connection that you can point out in a physical sense. They do share a common experience, though, and are able, because of it, to guess each others' thoughts.

Interesting is that the idea of transfer from John Henry to Cameron is entertained later on, though in a different context.

I guess that we'd have to see later on what John Henry's last pondering and Cameron's nod really meant.

What is really relevant is the last sentence: "But there is a certain path for cyborgs...", followed by his stare at Cameron. Not at a tree nearby, a bird or a cloud. At Cameron.
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0 # Todd 2011-06-14 09:44
Ok, this certain “path” for cyborgs then, Cameron is no longer a cyborg so that I would assume no longer applies to her but she was not “born” human. So this brings up the question of is she has a soul or not. Then again cyborgs are “suppose” to be emotionless yet we see how that turned out. Or maybe it has something to do with Catherine. Maybe she wants to take Skynets place as ruler of the world but then she has to consider Savannah also. Maybe Catherine figure Cameron to be a threat so she insisted on her being human to eliminate that problem should it arise.

You’re doing a fantastic job at writing this!! the story can be push in so many different ways. Keep up the hard work!!
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0 # Lumir G Janku 2011-06-21 04:32
Todd, Catherine does not want to become a ruler of the world. It should be clear from her actions, let alone her utterances. That does not mean she isn't ambitious. She carved up her niche and she's very protective of it.

You need to consider what her prerogatives likely are--though her expiry date is somewhat in a remote future, compared to the human lifespan, it is still there. She's aware of it. She's a lifeform and as such she wants to cheat the entropy--by reproducing. Everything else is subservient to that goal.

As Cameron goes, Catherine's motives seem to be somewhat clear too--she stated the reasons and unless there is an indication that it's otherwise, I'd take her word for it. For now.

Regarding the soul issue, Catherine presumes that Cameron has it. In her view that is to a great degree influenced by John Henry, the human DNA contains some form of a binding mechanism that is invoked and facilitated by the presence of functioning human brain. She sees the soul as something in the realm of physics, if the physics means something that includes more than what is apparent, or based only on the experiential reality.

Perhaps Catherine or John Henry may clarify it later on. But if we look at Sabina and Marion and their patterns that are very much human-like, maybe there is another variable that is a factor in determining who has it, if in fact Catherine's conviction about soul's existence has a merit.
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